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Jurassic Park, written by Michael Crichton, and which was first printed in 1988, is a novel about a theme park of the future in which dinosaurs roam free.

(A)NO CHANGE
(B)...
(C)...
(D)...
(E)...
(F)...
*This question is included in Nova Grammar IV: Faulty Parallelism, question #5

The solution is

Posted: 07/13/2012 19:03
I don't see why D doesn't work. The explanation says that the introduction rambles on, but answer choice d is the same as answer choice b, just in another order.
Posted: 11/19/2012 15:42
I agree with you. Why should choice B be correct if D sounds much better? Plus, why does it say that choice D is too long as an intro?
Posted: 07/18/2012 19:07
Jennifer, I agree with you (and disagree with the author of the question). Answer choices B and D should be both correct.
Posted: 11/13/2014 06:53
Reply: I think D makes the sentence in a flow... Like
Written in by Michael Crichton, and published in 1988, Jurasic park is a novel...etc.
you see the sentence is in a flow.
Posted: 11/13/2014 06:58
Hello, I am sorry about the choice, B is correct
Posted: 12/01/2015 03:40
Why is written parallel to printed

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